How's My Driving?

[soulmods]

How's My Driving?

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[eatdavesbabies]

First off, I want to say thank you for bringing these issues up to me. I appreciate you bringing them to my attention, especially since I'll admit freely that I've been having second thoughts on my characterization of him as of late in how I've tried to pursue. I'm not going to list a response to each point made in part because I'm on phone and don't have the ability to write up enough as is, as well as the fact that thinking on the decisions I've made lately even I feel there is something off.

Considering I had been having reservations about how I'd played him recently, that should have been a warning I should have stepped back and took a greater look at the reactions/justification I gave him. It's pretty clear that I had been trying to make pieces fit that didn't and had known this at least partially, and the points you've brought up are good evidence I wasn't just doubting myself but there was something wrong. I will state that Lucifer's anger wasn't aimed at Lilith in regards to her killing two weaklings so much as it was part of a shitty turn in the tide of the battle, but even that creates a paradox in his way of thinking.

I'd clearly allowed something outside the character's actual voice to influence how I wrote things, and that will definitely be something I will keep more aware of in the future. Thank you for the time you took to provide this criticism and advice to me.